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Chakra -B.O.T. Page 100 by ARVEN92

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Okay, I found some things in here that I think I should critiuqe on...

For starters, HOORAY FOR MOAR HARD CORE EMOTIONS! XD Your rock texture is amazing! Although since it's a cave and Kuma's no longer using his light, I think you should make the lighting a little darker owo And I loved Ushi's rage face XD
Ushi: HOW DARE YOU STEAL MAH TACO GIVE IT BACK! THE MEAT WAS MY MOMMY!
*cough*Cannibal*cough* XD

Anywho (lol sorry I get off topic a lot XD), I think you made Helio's scars too red. They look like they've been re-opened...
And on the last two frames, cheetah's paw (the white one) looks off, like his leg is twisted oddly.

So just a few tiny mistakes here and there, but otherwise, another job well done! :D
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OHMYYYY Thank you so much for this critique! <333

I'm really really happy you liked Ushi's part XDD Oh and thanks so much for pointing out about Hielo's scars, you're right, they're far too red :P And Cheetah's foot XD I agree with that too :D i'll have to be more careful on anatomies, especially from hard perspectives :D

Truly thank you SO much! <3
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Animalcrazy55 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anytime~ Sorry it was late XD DeviantART has been...weird lately XD
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww no worries, truly! XDDD
nd sorry I was late to reply D8
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Animalcrazy55 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You were late? :confused: XD I don't think so
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh thanks XD
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Animalcrazy55 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
rofl :dummy:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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