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 Comments OHMYYYY Thank you so much for this critique! <333
I'm really really happy you liked Ushi's part XDD Oh and thanks so much for pointing out about Hielo's scars, you're right, they're far too red  And Cheetah's foot XD I agree with that too  i'll have to be more careful on anatomies, especially from hard perspectives Truly thank you SO much! <3 |
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XD I don't think so
For starters, HOORAY FOR MOAR HARD CORE EMOTIONS! XD Your rock texture is amazing! Although since it's a cave and Kuma's no longer using his light, I think you should make the lighting a little darker owo And I loved Ushi's rage face XD
Ushi: HOW DARE YOU STEAL MAH TACO GIVE IT BACK! THE MEAT WAS MY MOMMY!
*cough*Cannibal*cough* XD
Anywho (lol sorry I get off topic a lot XD), I think you made Helio's scars too red. They look like they've been re-opened...
And on the last two frames, cheetah's paw (the white one) looks off, like his leg is twisted oddly.
So just a few tiny mistakes here and there, but otherwise, another job well done!